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Much as I love the literature community on dA, I find that it's quite hard to find writers with small fanbases and good writing. So here are a few of my favourites:

First up, :iconwillwriteforhearts:

willwriteforhearts has a wonderful style, with a good eye for plot development, and a great vocabulary, especially of adjectives. She writes wonderful prose, with a touch of mystery and morbidity that makes you read it twice. 
A good place to start in her gallery is my favourite piece, 

Like Cutting Hair“I have a surprise.” Says the second shadow. It stands next to me as I work on my computer, staring at me unwaveringly with a very thin smile. Its been scratching its fingers along the wall for over an hour. My nerves are fraying.
I take a sip from my coffee and avoid looking at it at all costs. I hate its eyes. I hate it. “You’ve said that already.”
“Let me show you.”
“No.” Another sip of coffee. My mother always taught me to look at a person when they talk to me and it’s very hard to break the habit. “I hate your surprises.”
“I like them.”
“Well, I don’t.” Don’t look. I sip the coffee again, my replacement action. Typing on the computer. I have to send a manuscript.
“You do. I’m like you so have to like it too.”
I don’t say anything.
Here’s a secret, friend; I’ve cut off my shadow three times, but cutting off your shadow is like cutting your



Next is :icondelirious-eyes:

delirious-eyes has a brilliant arsenal of similes and metaphors. Just saying that "he has clouded eyes" isn't nearly enough. It has to be "clouded eyes like wayward turbulent tornadoes." Of course, these comparisons add so much to their pieces and make them a joy to read. Their style is very distinctive and growing into something even better.
A good place to start would be 
perpetually we were both aliveclouded eyes like wayward turbulent tornadoes,
your oak tree limbs were lavished
across the vintage leather sofa that
your mother donated as a wedding gift
"how lovely it is that you're starting your
lives together"

(remember) you took a photograph of my inherited lips and kissed it
ten times with yours,
and i knew i was in the type of infatuation that made
teenage chest cavities palpitate and that finalized with disheveled kisses
on the forehead that spelled out, i want you
i also realized that i couldn't be in love with you when i unearthed your
closed eyelids and bloodied hand grasping an insidious pistol on the hardwood floor,
(the one you erratically mopped in case i somehow slipped)
and i lunged and languished for you to reawaken
(maybe your eyes would flutter open and you would sleepily whimper,
"i'm just drunk, dear")
but you were now buried underneath our cherished weeping willow
(where we shakily uttered our vows in our wedding clothes)
sometimes wh


Go explore. Link me with journals featuring your favourite unknown authors!


Best Wishes,
-Hyper Spider


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Exhausted

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That was hard.
Nasty Ass Challenge for Flash Fiction Month.
I'm gonna go to sleep now. I can't work any more.

Best Wishes,
-Hyper Spider


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When I Grow Up

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When I grow up....

I want to have a huge piece of property. Acres and acres of forests with pathways and open fields. I want a small house though. Almost all the walls will be windows.

And on summer nights, I'd like to just take a walk in my pajamas and my flip-flops, just walking all the pathways, listening to the nightlife of the animals and bugs and watching the sky. I'd like to have a hammock, where I can just lie down and explore the stars. I'd like to do all this alone, but I think friends would join me every once in a while. So long as they are quiet.

i love the feeling of walking around on a summers night, having just showered after a long day, and just being content, not really thinking of anything.

I'd like to do it all the time.

When I grow up.

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I've kind of just given up on studying for my exam tomorrow.
I'm so done with it.
There's this weird thing happening to me lately where I feel nothing.
I'm not happy, nor sad, for excited, nor stressed, nor worried, nor confused, nor tired. I'm just... nothing. It's a little weird.
And I can't figure out what triggers it. I'll be bright and excited one minute, and then just detatched and cool the next.
It's like I'm a ghost, and I'm just wandering around, unthinking, unfeeling, uncaring,
It just feels... weird.

On another note, I went to go and see Gatsby.
I've read the book multiple times, and I have to say, i didn't hate the movie as much as I thought I would. It was pretty good.
Go and see it.
And ignore the scene where he introduces himself, and the heavy handed usage of the two biggest metaphors (the green light and T.J. Eckleburg's eyes).

Best Wishes,
-Hyper Spider

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Things

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It's not that I have the self confidence to do these things, it's that I hope doing these things will give me the self confidence to have done them.
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The question is not "would you die for your friends?" but actually: "would you suffer for them?"
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If you've spent your whole life in the dark, who says you'll enjoy the light?

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